Our teacher asked us to write a love poem towards our first love, At first, i didnt feel like writing in a complex way, still, i felt inspired to remember myself and what i thought, during the stages of my first love.
To My Precious Anemone
A scattered dream that turns into a far off memory
A far off memory that becomes a scattered dream
I wanna line the pieces up
Yours and mine
Anemone, that was her name, I think
For her blossoming was that overwhelming
Or was it her siren figure, which slowed down timing
Or those gorgeous blue eyes, as shining as the caribean sea
Was her that special?
well, for my eyes which needed cure for such beauty and grace
and my body would not answer
nor my wasted heart, blinded by you, beautiful Anemone of mine
At least that was what you showed
because in the end, you knew my self and soul you owned
Though i knew your intentions were not pure
I still fell for it for sure
You were the flower in my garden,
My sun and my sky
I felt like in Eden´s Grden back then
When you turned my shadow into light
But so happy was I,
For I knew you would hold my hand in every dream at night
Thought our love would last long
Oh, sweet Anemone, now its me who is ashamed to say
That for me, you were the right kind of wrong
I´m speechless.
ResponderEliminarEither as a poet or a songwriter I really think you are a very talented young man. Congratulations on your creativity and effort. Your poem is very expressive and moving. It´s a pleasure to read you. Thanks for sharing!
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